Revised video Scripts
After our first attempt at making instructional scripts for a video (see the presentation here), we revised what we needed to improve about it, making sure we used words like "side" and "face" and "flap" as well as using time connectives. This is the result;



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An excellent presentation. Really clear and confidently done. Well done.
Posted by: Mr O'Riordan Class 7 | 4 Feb 2010 19:14:48
keava could of looked at the camrer a bit more
Posted by: jakob | 2 Feb 2010 19:37:26
good job pipa keva loise i think emly and stella
Posted by: abby | 2 Feb 2010 19:07:07