Revised video Scripts

After our first attempt at making instructional scripts for a video (see the presentation here), we revised what we needed to improve about it, making sure we used words like "side" and "face" and "flap" as well as using time connectives. This is the result;

Comments

[Mr O'Riordan Class 7]

An excellent presentation. Really clear and confidently done. Well done.

[jakob]

keava could of looked at the camrer a bit more

[abby]

good job pipa keva loise i think emly and stella