Persuasive Writing - Skateboard Ramp

Here are some examples of Class 1 work.

Download Ramp letter by Mathilda
Download Skateboard ramp by Sophie

Edit from Mr Widdowson - Mathilda and Sophie, if you are wondering why your letters have changed, we needed to remove the address and surname within your work for eSafety reasons. Your original letters are still saved on the server, these letters have been saved with a different filename.

Comments

[M. Crawford]

Well done girls, excellent work! Well done Miss. S. too!